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Once, there was a young girl named Freedert, that lived in a beautiful village.
When she was little, she had two friends, whom were both boys.
Their names were Elliot and Kael.
The three of them were always together.
However, at some point of their lives, Freedert and Elliot became attracted to one another.
"We'll be together forever. Yes, I promise."
Then, the war began.
Freedert gave Elliot, who was going to fight, a sword, to protect him.

The morning he was to leave, Elliot asked Kael, whom he believed he could trust, to look after Freedert.
"I'll be back as soon as I can," he explained. "Will I'm gone, look after Freedert."
"Don't worry. Leave it to me," replied Kael. "I'll protect her, no matter what."
Then, Elliot was gone.
However, Kael was madly in love with Freedert.
Enough to make him hate his best friend.
Kael went to the work of art that had been handed down in the village, the Second Hand Of Time, believed to be the guardian of time, and made a forbidden wish.
"Please stop Elliot's time!" begged Kael. "I know I'm wrong to ask this, but I don't want Freedert to belong to him! If Elliot dies in battle, I'm sure Freedert will...!"

Elliot took a spear in the back and died in battle.
That spear had a shape of a giant second hand.
Hearing this, Freedert prayed to the Second Hand Of Time.
"Please give all my time to him."

"Freedert!" screamed Kael when he opened the door and saw her lying on the floor, dead.
Kael never thought that it would lead to the death of his beloved Freedert.

When Elliot, back to life because of Freedert's wish, returned to the village,he saw a cold gravestone with Freedert's name carved apon it.

"If it is her light that is giving me life, I return this life to her."
Elliot used the sword that Freedert had given to protect him, and stabbed himself.
At the foot of the Second Hand Of Time where Elliot had fallen, the sword emitted a strange light....and he became the Pin Link Of Time.

The Second Hand Of Time had taken over Kael's time, as he made the forbidden wish. He continually suffered from regret and despair.
Then, after writing this story as a confession, he was allowed to die.

"This is a true story."

Written by Kael Enduil
Rewrtten by TrueCloud.




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Anonymous i love it... 0 Mar 28 2009, 12:31 PM EDT by Anonymous
 
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waaahh...
i really like there story..
even it wasa tragic...
well..
i think true love can nbe means of every thing..
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